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« Reply #810 on: March 17, 2008, 07:15:29 pm »

How dare he! I'm a gentleman! Well, sorta. At least I can easily pretend to be one.

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« Reply #811 on: March 17, 2008, 07:17:44 pm »

I can't believe it! My flawless disguise has failed! Hmm, maybe I shouldn't have wasted my all points on Streetwise and Etiquette...

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« Reply #812 on: March 17, 2008, 07:25:48 pm »

Great sarcastic lines. Continue, don't tease the AoD hungry masses! Smile
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« Reply #813 on: March 17, 2008, 07:26:21 pm »

I say we go with the "How much do you want?" option.  Wink
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« Reply #814 on: March 17, 2008, 07:28:11 pm »

Hmmm, I've only read the first few pages, but here's my opinion:

Start combat with the whole ****ing town!
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« Reply #815 on: March 17, 2008, 07:33:08 pm »

Great sarcastic lines. Continue, don't tease the AoD hungry masses! Smile
We'll be back after the following messages:

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« Reply #816 on: March 17, 2008, 07:35:40 pm »

If you weren't the developer, you'd be on my hit-list! Grin
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« Reply #817 on: March 17, 2008, 07:40:42 pm »

Nice dialog. As always, you're a master of sarcasm. (I actually can't believe it took me this long to figure out that the reason for the pseudonym is so we don't realize you're Sheek's grandfather!)

Is there more coming? It seems like it would be nice to always end the Let's Play segments with a choice.

Also, a couple of quick issues:

In AoD 41.jpg, Dellar's first line should be "He did, did he?" if you want it to be doubtful/sarcastic/dismissive. "He did, didn't he?" implies that Dellar is realizing and acknowledging that you're right and he had previously been mistaken, which doesn't make as much sense in context.

In AoD 42.jpg, Dellar's first line is grammatically incorrect. If you want it to sound basically the same, but not look wrong, it could be changed to:
"That's Master Feng's job -- to assure people that their junk is valuable. And it's my job to get proper tributes from those who seek an audience."

If you want it actually to be grammatically correct, you could go with:
"It's Master Feng's job to assure people that their junk is valuable, and it's my job to get proper tributes from those who seek an audience."

Keep up the great work!

EDIT: Why does it look the Coca Cola girl is wearing creepy yellow rubber serial killer gloves?
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« Reply #818 on: March 17, 2008, 07:46:44 pm »

!EDIT: Why does it look the Coca Cola girl is wearing creepy yellow rubber serial killer gloves?
Because they match the headpiece!
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« Reply #819 on: March 17, 2008, 07:51:42 pm »

Is there more coming? It seems like it would be nice to always end the Let's Play segments with a choice.
Yes. Just give me a few minutes. I had to help my daughter with a school project.

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In AoD 41.jpg, Dellar's first line should be "He did, did he?" if you want it to be doubtful/sarcastic/dismissive. "He did, didn't he?" implies that Dellar is realizing and acknowledging that you're right and he had previously been mistaken, which doesn't make as much sense in context.

In AoD 42.jpg, Dellar's first line is grammatically incorrect. If you want it to sound basically the same, but not look wrong, it could be changed to:
"That's Master Feng's job -- to assure people that their junk is valuable. And it's my job to get proper tributes from those who seek an audience."

If you want it actually to be grammatically correct, you could go with:
"It's Master Feng's job to assure people that their junk is valuable, and it's my job to get proper tributes from those who seek an audience."
Thanks. I really appreciate your help.
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« Reply #820 on: March 17, 2008, 08:00:57 pm »

Like every stereotypical RPG denizen Dellar has problems.

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« Reply #821 on: March 17, 2008, 08:04:20 pm »

Too much enthusiasm?! You've gotta be kidding me.

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« Reply #822 on: March 17, 2008, 08:36:22 pm »

How about adding to Titus response on AoD 45 this:
"Yes...as you are charming. What was the other problem?"
Just to respond to his provocation. Not really important but may suit the tone of the conversation.
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« Reply #823 on: March 17, 2008, 09:04:13 pm »

On AOD 46, shouldn't it be "have managed to capture" and not "had managed to capture"?
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« Reply #824 on: March 17, 2008, 09:27:56 pm »

On AOD 46, shouldn't it be "have managed to capture" and not "had managed to capture"?

Yes.
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